Wednesday, March 24, 2010

swimming in a fish bowl

just keep swimming
just keep swimming

round round
right round like a record baby

hello, is there anybody in there?
i have become comfortably numb.

caught in the in-between,
a beautiful disaster

but i'm not crazy, just a little unwell
i'm falling apart, i'm barely breathing

check my vital signs to know i'm still alive
and i walk alone

i'll send an s.o.s to the world
i hope that someone gets my message

but in the end, it doesn't even matter

~sol know my mind is fluttering in despair when I can't even pick the music mood I'm in.


septembermom said...

I really like the honesty in this one. Very nice. The imagery and intensity carries the impact of the poem. Good job sol :)

Sara Louise said...

You've captured my mood at the moment perfectly. Take deep breaths and lots of wine :-)

sol said...

thanks ladies! i couldn't describe how i was feeling or even why i was feeling this way. music heals me, soothes my i used lyrics to describe it.

Southpaw said...

I've had those days. I agree music heals and soothes.

Deboshree said...

Now is this weird or is this weird?

I was in an exactly same frame of mind just a few days ago! I couldn't feel anything. Just a numbness which made me feel that something is terribly missing.
But I found out that when we try hard enough, we end up getting what we want. I did understand later what was bothering me. You'll find out too my friend. All in good time.

Much love


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